All Comments on 'Party Kate'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Love the rough stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I wish I was her

Minus some grammatical errors, great story. Just enough details and the right length to build up to a great finish.

irvlynirvlynalmost 8 years ago
awful

bad writing, stupid idea, not really very sexy. r u illiterate or just dumb?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Pity you can't spell

Close/clothes... not bad otherwise

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

him and her.......????? Work on grammar

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