by sr71plt
In my opinion, this is one of this author's best stories. But I think it would have been more erotic if Lord Reginald had skipped the condom and properly had pollinated this young student's tender bud with his hot spunk.
I loved the first tale in this story about the deflowering of young Percy. Sheer brilliance by the author but didn't care for the remaining portions of the story, although I finally understand the meaning of the tile, which I didn't until I read the rest of the story which I normally don't do.
I wish the author had continued on with more deflowering stories which I find extremely erotic.
Also, considering the era in which the story seems to take place, I thought the use of condoms was unnecessary and detracted from the eroticism.
I liked how the servant conned his master, quite sweetly and to both their pleasure.
At the part on this page after the asterisks, it should say that Edwin was kissing REGINALD's lips, not Edwin's lips.
But this was a lot of fun to read. I wish there was more to it.
a soupcon of literary pretention with my smut! Naughty, naughty to use Mr. Donne this way. Of course, he was a randy s.o.b. before he found religion...
I thought it was a very funny story and I loved the ending Great writing as ever
Very clever twist, but what else should we expect from habu. Good Luck.