All Comments on 'Passion and Lust 01'

gud work man please dont stop

Hope you continue the story too see where they get up to and what Happens when Sister LUST appears. and does Allen get his Riches. or the girl?

Glad to see that Allen is a bit of a jerk. It adds a different slant.

It might make things more authentic if an actual location (even if fictitous) of the "archealogical site" were given or described, as well as Allen's bonafides. What is his job? How far is he from home? I assume he has some friends. Are they jerks and wankers as well? You might add something about how he came across the information needed to find Nel's room. Or do you plan on adding anything like that? Many possibilities here.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!👍😁

Well written and sexy. 11/10 for you. :)

Amusing concept, certainly original for Lit. Let's see where this goes.