by AreUReady
impressive work! very good story. sweet and actually well structured as a story! keep up the good work.
great read with some real world mixed in to add to the realism of what they are doing
great drama! A life and death struggle. Well inhibited "innocents". What else could they do?
I loved the story--juicy AND feasible. BUT, in the real world, if you follow Julie's example, you could lose too much heat and die. It does work with a threesome, though. But hey, I'm not complaining. I just think it's important to know, lest any readers find themselves in this situation. Rock on!