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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Lovely

I love this story. Wicked ending. Literally!

YaoiHuntressEYaoiHuntressEalmost 17 years ago
I agree

The ending is such a neat play on the meaning of "joy."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Very Clever

A whole lot of things twited about very neatly into the dark pit that is the ending. I enjoyed it very much.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...