All Comments on 'Pawn of the Living Dead'

Wonderful story ! Well thought out & imaginatively presented ! Truly enjoyable and excellently written ! Keep up the good work.

Oh, I love how Nancy got to take some control in the end, nice! The dialogue between the possessed and the possessor was entertaining and never once was I confused with who was speaking. (Granted, the italics helped, but it still could have been a problem, if not crafted just so.) I'm glad this brand of revenge didn't end with another murder. This seemed much more appropriate, and both women got to have a little fun, too. A nice end to writers' block :) Goodluck!

~Luna

I really enjoyed this one.

Nicely plotted and executed.

HP