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Click hereI smiled. It had been worth it.
'It will be when we get home,' Ann agreed.
Oh?
'Whether I'm in charge or not, I can still give you that orgasm you started earlier this evening. As long as you let me, baby.'
My smile was even broader as I started the car and pulled into the road.
I really enjoyed this one.
Nicely plotted and executed.
HP
Oh, I love how Nancy got to take some control in the end, nice! The dialogue between the possessed and the possessor was entertaining and never once was I confused with who was speaking. (Granted, the italics helped, but it still could have been a problem, if not crafted just so.) I'm glad this brand of revenge didn't end with another murder. This seemed much more appropriate, and both women got to have a little fun, too. A nice end to writers' block :) Goodluck!
~Luna
Wonderful story ! Well thought out & imaginatively presented ! Truly enjoyable and excellently written ! Keep up the good work.