All Comments on 'Pay Day'

You've gotten the raise.

EroticLily,

This is an unusually hot little erotic story from the young secretary's POV. You do have the insights and the imagination and feel the shivers. You only made one tiny little mistake. You say, "My panties stick to my soaked cunt lips..." But then in the very next paragraph your handsome boss discover you have on no panties. When did you take them off?

I want to see more of your work. Keep your juices flowing. Make it easy on yourself. Simple: Write a sequel to this episode from the guy's point of view and divulge how much he is willing to pay to eat her cunt.

This is a good storyline and you could milk it (no pun intended) into a series with a dozen chapters.

..a hot, well written story. I like the language, attention to detail and the way the characters relate as they indulge each other's needs. More.. More...

She shouldn't let his ficus wilt..... Ever, he might make a call.

What else is Laurel up to, she didnt go right home did she.

This got my little bud dripping