All Comments on 'Paybacks'

I hope to see more of your stories, in the future.

Excellent work!

Velly good, exerent!!!

Incredible character development! As far-out as some of the action is, I totally believe it because of the way you set up the two girls and their history together. Please write more about these two!

Thank you for creating a sexy character that is no doormat. Her easy freedom and confidence is very alluring. I loved how the relationship between these two blossomed. I hope you have more stories with these characters. I can't wait to see what happens at the big event!

I just found this old story of yours as a result of reading your new "Christmas Cookies" story. After reading that one I checked your other submissions to see what else you might have and that's when I found this one. I liked "Christmas Cookies" and this one's even better.<p>

Just wish you did a lot more, since out of all the stories you've written this is one of only two exhibitionism stories.