All Comments on 'Paying a Debt Ch. 02'

by ClarenceDarrow

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Phil_PatsfanPhil_Patsfanabout 9 years ago
I have a question

So far it's a pretty good story, but I have a question: Emily sold her friend out , a friend who had come to help her. Will Emily get what she truly deserves (to be in Katie's position, only worse off) ? And what about Katie? She doesn't deserve what is going to happen to her. It would be better if she at least landed on her feet or got her life back. I'm all for hot sex scenes, but it's unfair for Emily to run free while Katie pays for her sins, when Katie's only mistake was going to her "friend's" aid.

abob1abob1about 9 years ago
a different opinion

Contrary to the previous comment, what I like about this story so far is that Katie, who came to the aid of her friend, is the one in the bad position. That Emily actually profited, instead of just erasing her debt, actually turned me on more. We all know that life is not fair, and in this case it that is really hot!

I hope Katie gets sold and has to undergo slave training elsewhere in the world.

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