All Comments on 'Peeping Tomasena Ch. 02'

This is a wonderful continuation of the first story! You express all of the exciting mixed emotions, then lead us through a wonderful climax! You've got me excited! Great job!

Chrissie,

Very, very well written, good characterisation and descriptive prose. Very erotic as well, it goes without saying! Keep up the good work and keep at this level, she's gently experiencing a whole new world so moving on to her having sex with ten men in public in the next story isn't going to be appropriate. Let the story develop naturally and this (and your other works) will be excellent.

Cheers

I loved your first story and your second is a great sequel. Keep up the excellent work.

Great addition to the first, incredibly engaging.

I want to go "dogging"!!!!

Just very exciting and filled with tension. The sort of read that you just want to enjoy for hours.

To page one? When I clicked on the 2nd part of this story there was no text until I went to page 2.

On the android app story comes up as page 1/0 blank and no text

There is no text on Page 1 of Chapter 2

The first page is empty. You need to resubmit this story.

It is a great tale. I wish I could met a lady dogger on her own I woud just watch and reciprocate in a male way. Thankyou for the great sensual feelings you caused XX