All Comments on 'Perceptions Ch. 01'

Please give us more! They're young and I'm sure will be horny in other places than her room. This is a great start!!

more fucking water melons some fucking morons call tits

Made it to the 34 es and said fuck it,, not even realistic ffs

why not just say she trips over the fucking things when she dont have her 3 inch thick leather harness to hold en up

I second the previous comment 1*

If a comment is posted anonymously, it forfeits whatever consideration it might otherwise be given. I enjoyed your story, and look forward to the next chapter. I liked the sudden change from active dislike to thrashing raw passion, and the urgent need to brush her teeth was a nice tip of the hat to teen neuroses. Write more soon, please!

To Anonymous - thanks for the comments, they're pretty hilarious. But if anyone who is a little confused by the 'proportions' of my main character - they're actually based on my own, so thanks for letting me know I'm impossible (:

xoxo Susannah

Don't quit your day job.