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by ShionAsha

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Were You Getting Paid Per Ellipsis Period????

This POSSIBLY had the makings of a decent piece of erotica, if not for the UNENDING ...'s and -'s.<BR><BR>NO ONE TALKS LIKE THAT, so NO ONE SHOULD WRITE LIKE THAT!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Come on, it was good for a first story

Only solution is...The more you write, the better you get

ShionAshaShionAshaover 14 years agoAuthor
The ellipses eh?

Yeah see there was this one guy that had an ellipses fetish so, eh. Sorry if that is a bad bit of my writing style. I'll pay more attention to it. How long would is three periods in real time? 1 second? 5 seconds?

I'd like to think it wasn't a complete zero just because of that though. Either way, thanks for reading!

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