by wtdgirl1
The story is a little far fetched, so two individuals walk off of the street and then at the end of the day they are madly in love, really.
A litle far-fetched. They only just met that day and they're already telling eachother they love eachother? Also, the whole searching for feelings in the others eyes was a little repetitive.
Good overall though. Keep it up. :)
Please do check for typos and resubmit. In the first paragraph you say "refuse" when you mean "refuge". Please also remove the need to guess about Peter and Boyd.
You're correct Peter and Boyd are the same person.
His full name (incase you haven't seen the show) is Peter Boyd, but most if not all of his colleagues call him Boyd.