All Comments on 'Perils of Pauline Conrad: Shut Up and Listen'

a man mistakenly thinking himself an erotic author - back to school little one. Rape let alone gang rape isn't!

I don't know what the first comment was about, but the writer of that comment should have paid more attention in English class. This wasn't a bad story. The first commenter seemed to dislike the rape aspect. Well, perhaps they shouldn't read stories in the non-consent section then. I saw the twist at the end coming, but I still liked the story.

The category is nonconsent/reluctance, right? Well, that anonymous guy should stick to the 'Romance' stories. It was a good story with a nice twist at the end. You had some grammatical mistakes, so you may want to use an editor. Keep writing.