All Comments on 'Permission For Pleasure'

by LonelyMom

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
This is erotic literature at its finest!

What a well-written account of a passionate encounter. I found myself standing in the ballroom watching the evening unfold. Later, you made me feel as if I was in the room with you and Roger, watching your passion reach its pinnacle. I wonder, how does the morning progress, now that you have given yourself permission to let go? I'll be waiting for Chapter 2....or more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
The assembled masses

burst into spontaneous applause as the tears of shared joy tumbled down their happy faces. Thank you for a beautiful journey shared. Hope there is more.

rgraham666rgraham666almost 17 years ago
Lovely

What a sweet story.

The author did a wonderful job with the central character, filled us in on her life, drew her actions, thoughts and emotion wonderfully. She set the scenario very well.

The final scene was very sensual and erotic.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Awesome story!

Wonderful job - keep on writing! Very erotic and sensual.

Conan_T_BarbarianConan_T_Barbarianalmost 17 years ago
Well Done!

Excellent work, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
permission

very well written ,,loved it,,the best i have read in a long time

2lips4u2lips4ualmost 17 years ago
Superb!

Beautifully written and well-thought out. I could totally relate to it. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Awsome

Possibly the best story I have read yet on here. Bravo. You should write professionaly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot description of a realistic, passionate loving

Thanks for a hot story. It kept me hard and leaking. More than once your descriptions reminded me of my own passionate memories. Please give us more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderfully written...

That story was exceptional, very erotic and sensual...kept me reading intently through the very end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
i'm with you mama

hope you have found him... i'm lookin for mine! thanks for a lovely story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Past memories.

Wonderful story. Could have been me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful!

Beautifully written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
You're Never Too Old

The sands of time flow over the young and old.

Never deny yourself the pleasures you're capable of......

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well done

I loved your story and writting style. Great work, will read more of yours soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
fantastic

What a beautiful story, any woman would love that to happen to them, i can relate to this story, but i am only 34, and my lover was just 19, but he knew what to do, made my toes curl, something that has not happened in a while,

have a great, safe new year.

Lucioz xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

IrfonIrfonalmost 13 years ago
Good.

Good to hear of a woman having herself some fun...especially after such a selfish & painful divorce.

Go girl !!

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
permission granted

I hope she is renewed and lets herself enjoy herself as much as I enjoyed this touching story.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You wrote like you know what you want

I have been the lover an a few older women.

RedDevil5875RedDevil5875about 6 years ago
A New Favorite

I've just discovered your stories. This is the first one I've read and I enjoyed the story. You have great writing style and I think I've just found a new favorite author. These stories have been up a while. Please consider writing again? I hope you need a new pen name now. Perhaps WellLovedMom, HappyWife or NoLongerLonely?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You Have a Gift!

Spectacular ability to create a vision and communicate passion that is very hard to do. I have found a new favorite as well! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Let yourself live!

Deliciously hot. Uncertain up to the point that you could not deny your needs....

Thank you for writing this.

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