All Comments on 'Perpetual Boner'

Maybe this one should have been categorized in "Humor and Satire," but I thought it was very funny. I've seen the Viagra ads when they warn that if your erection lasts more than four hours, you should seek medical attention, but all day, every day, that's something else. So what's the name of the bar where this blonde was hanging out? I think I might like to find her--it would be a lot cheaper than a Viagra prescription. :) I want to read the remaining chapters to see what happens to this poor bloke with the perpetual hard on.

I don't see anything wrong with it other than your trouble with the difference between "your" and "you're" and with "their" and "there".

I thought for a while now that Priapism would be a good set up for a hot story. More please.