All Comments on 'Peter's Memories'

You're a good writer. I just wish that you had have included more build-up in your story. More teasing. Actually it could be expanded into 2 stories -- one focusing on Jane and another with Claire, then perhaps even a third including both

It is a bit short but I would rather have a well written short story like this than a tome of lurid fantasy.

As usual this author spins a very good tale although I would have to agree with epiphany. This theme could very well be expanded to several more very good stories.

You got it right Jena...Thanks, Peter