All Comments on 'Photo Shoot'

Wow! Just plain erotic. Beautiful prose. Thank you for the gift of this story.

Ed

She went to Jared, or was it Sam. A whore forgets.

To the top 2 reviewers thanks for your comments, I really appreciate them.

The other four trolls that I just deleted don't bother reviewing if you're going to be an arse. This was one of my first pieces of fiction before I was picked up by the publishers.

The author wrote a story that could have happened, and the people in the story seemed real, and that makes it a believable story A sexy hot wife and two horny men, mix in a camera and you have a situation where someone wants to fuck. You can't go wrong writing about a wife's wet pussy and a couple of hard cocks wanting to fill her up.Thanks for the good story.....Rich

Your first story was not bad. It could have used more romance for the cateogry. Menage a trois fantasies can be very beautiful: even better in person!! Keep writing you have talent and you will improve.