All Comments on 'Photographs Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

he should take a 2 x 4 up with chapter and beat the bastard while he sleeps hurry up with chapter 2

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
I would like to see where this is going!

Well written even though I don't like the subject matter...have to see what's next...that eventually he gets his publicly as appearances are sooo important to him.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 9 years ago
Please keep this going till the end.

I must know how it all turns out.

ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

I wouldn't risk getting locked for anyone but this is one instance where I might. First Danny need to get the details on this arrangement then torture his stepdad in the same manner. His mom is making too many excuses and pushing Danny to move away. Steve is a psychopath and it wouldn't matter where Danny is living, she would still be getting the beatings.

WeezyfWeezyfover 2 years ago

She is suprisingly kind of robotic and easy in how she handled this. No/barely comforting him at seeing his mom beaten like that. Like she barely cares that shes all messed up.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Liked the story but you need to finish it and have Danny buy a 45 and blow the bastards head off gave it a 4!!

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