by WMDean
Fast and furious. The action just didn't let up. Great Story
Cheers
I thought it was going to be slow but it picked up sooner than expected and didn't stop! Good story.
I loved your scenes with Pepper. It's the way I love to have sex. If a woman were with me right now, I'd have her read this and we'd have sex in the same scenario. Well done - precum oozing out.
This romance story is well-paced, with a good introduction and a careful buildup, along with some surprising twists along the way. The romantic plot is excellent and interesting, and full of love and tenderness. In short, this is romance writing at its best. Five stars.