All Comments on 'Picking up the Pieces Ch. 07'

this must have been how Peggy was able to keep everyone happy, she was doing the old man in exchange for financial support just like her husband is having to do his daughter for the same reason. Probably why the suppliers are drying up as well, no peggy to keep them happy and worn out! Fun series never the less.

I read the whole story only because I thought the next line has got to be better than this!,,, Wrong!!

- gallopping over the hills now?

that is well done and puts everything that came before in doubt. Still I like the storyteller's ability to write sketched that sound very real.

This was a very very engaging story till you killed off Peggy and began writing a sex story. It is too late for me to abandon your story so I will have to continue further.

Observation: This story was Excellent, it would make a very nice short story book and also maybe a TV Movie. dfe