All Comments on 'Pickup'

and a funny ending ! Nicely done.

Well written, fun story though the dialect & vocabulary seemed a bit at odds with eachother.

Nicely written story,enjoyable.Will be reading more of your work,Steve

light hearted reading, I didnt mind it all. Nice twist at the end.

You should have had her do a DP that would be what I would charge.

I would have to say well written. The beginning has a nice hook and as always your body is well formed and perfectly conditioned with sexy scenes that pull the mind into the situation like watching a movie. I must disagree with whoever wrote that you should have put a double penetration scene in. You've written many stories that include many different sexual situations, and it would be difficult for me to suspend my disbelief if every story you wrote had one particular sexual act over and over again, especially one with which most women are not comfortable with.

What's with no ass fuck, y'all? I want to see this little lady air tight! Great story.