All Comments on 'Pictures in the Park'

This was well written and quite believable in its progression, I was a little disappointed in the ending as it was a little too "matter of fact".

The story reminded me of a series of photoshoots I did as a young and horny budding photographer. The model was a good friend and our photo sessions were really a slow and progressive mutual seduction. This story brought back a lot of the memories and feelings I had more than 40 years ago.

I take it from this that she hired the photographer, and the arrangement was that she'd keep all the negatives? For a model portfolio, a keepsake or as a gift for a lover / spouse? It would have helped set the scene better if that had been clarified at the start.

I liked the detail....the setting down of the camera, filtering in the noise and becoming aware of the painful rock. All very believable. i also like the feel it left me

With and no not the obvious one..

Thank you for your comments. The detail you speak of came from the real experiences. As for the negatives and the prints I kept them all. I had them done for myself. Thanks for reading!