All Comments on 'Pinky'

Seems like a good start for a decent tale. One thing:

PIA ZADORA CHURCH?

Damn, she was hot in her time. Looked good naked too.

I've never seen any writer with the audacity to leave the reader dangling in mid-air the way you do! Brilliant! This is like sitting on the porch of the general store, listening to the old-timers spin their yarns! You keep waiting for the punchline...(wait for it...wait for it...) Then, you find you are kicking yourself in the rear all the way home for not realizing the story IS the punchline!