All Comments on 'Pixie, Katie and Me Ch. 01'

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Romantic1Romantic1almost 15 years agoAuthor
Comment by Author to Anonymous

Please read my other stories and you will see great consistency in the characters and the philosophy espoused in this story. I don't believe the adjectives you attribute to the story apply if you read things carefully. Further, this is Chapter 1 and several of the issues that seem to concern you are resolved by story's end. // Romantic1

Scorpio44Scorpio44almost 15 years ago
Well written, and

beautifully crafted! Thank you. For those who haven't experienced polyamory relationships this is a good look into one way they can be joyful and complex. I cannot wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
very touching

complicated story to write

drdirty8drdirty8almost 11 years ago
very hot

This story was very hot and vivid.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Pregnant women in hotubs = birth defects

Nueral tube defects can be caused by hot tub usage by pregnant women.

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 3 years ago

Well... Glad to have the story back on track. I loved the Joy character in the previous story line, but the continuity errors in it threw me for a loop. I like the timeline being straightened out and thing returning to 'normal'. One thing I did catch is you started the counselor as a male then the rest of the time it was a female.

The counselor was amazed at the unconventional viewpoints about relationships that Mel and I had, particularly Mel. He told us frankly that he'd never seen a couple like us. I can still remember his mouth hanging open in near disbelief as Mel and I told him about the four years that Mel, Joy and I had been a threesome. She never said one word in judgment of how we'd lived, and in fact, I think she empathized with the emotions we shared with her.

I am glad you brought Richard up and answered the question of Katie that you glazed over in porn queen.

great job 5 stars!

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