All Comments on 'Pizza's Here'

Great beginning of a series. Would love to have heard more drawn out description of the activity. Good start

I loved this scenario, you need to be writing more. :)

I have to give this high marks for the sex, but its almost as if the authors' making it up as she goes along. The gawky pizza-delivery guy got into oral sex way too fast and with a much too horny girl to be believable.

it was an awsome story with just enough detail with out if being over whelming, just needed a little bit better of an ending, to eh of an ending

Should have taken Kris up the ass as a special thank you

Excellent story that needed more. I wondered what happened next. Thank You!