All Comments on 'Planet of the Normen'

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Sir GalahadSir Galahadabout 9 years ago
Good start. Where do you go from here?

This is a good start to the story, a nice role reversal story. But I am curious to know where you plan to take it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
excellent start

interested to see how it develops

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

fantastic work all around

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well if nothing else, f**k Gerrod and his dumb logic of just do what I say I'm the expert and double f**k Sharon for dragging Polly into her dumb assery , if she had any brains it her skull dont give the robot the power over you on a f**k robot ruled planet, Polly's a whiny tag along submissive bimbo.

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