by TNP_
It's nice to see a story for a change about Shannen Doherty that doesn't play the "she's such a bitch" card over and over again. I love your writing style and all the wisecracks that were peppered throughout the story were amusing.
'To my credit, I did not shriek this like a little girl encountering a bug. It was much more manly than that. More of a squawk.'
^ That's a pretty good example of what TNP does. Great descriptive scenes with fantastic sex, dialogue and all in all a believable story.
Add this author to your favourites and you will not be disappointed!