All Comments on 'Plans for the Evening'

by Torinona

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Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineabout 10 years ago
You're Getting Even Better!

Tori, your descriptive talents are really good. You make me want to delete my meagre attempts at erotica and porn and just wait for your next story.

This story is obviously written by a woman, and that's not a bad thing. Keep going!

dacoach44dacoach44about 10 years ago
I could feel it

How erotic; a librarian, of all things! Amazing, how quickly they both turned into animals. Very convincing, Torinona. Please keep it up.

Big Daddy

flipenflipenalmost 10 years ago
Great Story

Really enjoyed how the story moved along...easy to envision the scene. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Great story, I loved it.

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