All Comments on 'Plantation Family'

by cwr2000

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imurddyimurddyover 13 years ago
period pieces

I was reading this thinking, 'cool, a period piece, antebellum, and all that' all of a sudden I read 'her unusually shaved pussy' and I thought, 'what woman back then would be crazy enough to put a four inch straight razor near her pussy?' Shaved crotches didn't appear until at least the 1980's. If you're going to write a period piece, make it accurate. If you want to write a sexy story about women with shaved pussies put it in the right time period. That being said, I'm going to read the story and see how I like the rest of it and comment on the story-line later.

imurddyimurddyover 13 years ago
not bad

It wasn't bad, just not very accurate in some sense, but very titilating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
interesting theme......

crap execution. buy some punctuation. please.

lovelybrownpussylovelybrownpussyalmost 11 years ago

so good! i loved it. please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Need more stories like this type. Enjoy the Master on Slave, Mistress on Slave, but really enjoy mom and daughter sharing dad. Please write more of type.

_Saturday_Saturdayover 1 year ago

Interesting work, keep it up. Maybe play up more raceplay. It’s fantasy and doesn’t need to be politically correct. Which I’m sure you already know! Thanks for the story

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