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I went straight to my room, took a shower, feeling somehow variously dirty for what I'd seen, and I laid down on the bed, full length, in the nude. I hadn't locked the door. I waited for an hour for Nico to return to me. But then I had dozed off. In the middle of the night, I rose and wrapped myself in the cotton robe the hotel had provided and moved silently down the corridor to the door to Nico's room. I knocked quietly on the door. And then louder. But there was no response, no sign of stirring on the other side of the door.
I went back to my room and lay on the bed, and fidgeted myself to a restless sleep.
- COMMENTS
sr71pltabout 11 years agoAuthorI think it's great that you are enough into the story to see the tension in the relationship. Nico is preattached to someone else (although there are tensions there too) and that someone else is a make or breaker in Nico's world, so I'm going with a dose of reality here. At this point it would also be realistic to find he was just a shallow predator, though, wouldn't it and that the protagonist just finds someone else before story's end? That's what should be happening in the middle of a story--tension and dilemma being churned--possibilities raised. Part 4 is on the way, and rest assured it includes resentment, a slice of revenge, and a car wheels screeching and someone being left in the dust scene (but this is a romance, so that's not an ending either. There's a part 5, so I'd suggest a little "wait for it" is in order). But glad you obviously are in to it.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoSr71plt, my comment from last night is just because that was how I was feeling right after I read chapter 3. Can't wait to see where this all leads, because it is a great story line. No disrespect intended toward you from last nights comment, sorry.
adjoaqabout 11 years agoI really don't see why he shd be pissed off. Afterall, the Master calls. Can't be ignored right. Lol. So far, so hott!
sr71pltabout 11 years agoAuthorAnd you're assuming that nothing like that happens in the as-yet-unposted fourth chapter? *smile*
Anonymousabout 11 years agoIf I were Collin, I would be severely p iss ed off at Nico! Nico invites him to the Conclave, with Collin having no clue what it is about; and then Nico just abandons him to go hook up with someone else. If I were Collin, I would tell Nico to take his Conclave and shove it where the sun don't shine!
