All Comments on 'Play Time with Sis Ch. 01'

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a great start. I can't wait to read ch.02.

Stopped after the paragragh and your 10" crap. Get a life and get real

Read less like a story and more like a locker room lie...only unrealistic.

More thought is needed here as well as detailed descriptions on the action.

I thought the story lacked depth and painted words to make it interesting.

Overall your short introduction for a continued story is very good. I would ignore anyone who is too afraid to put their name to their response. There are those of us who willingly put our name out there for any and all to see and if the author wishes to contact, you can. Keep up the good work.

I stopped reading when I got to the "10" cock (like most on here do) you probably have a '5" cock and would like a 10"er. You need to go back to reading Comic Books and get a real life with/in a real world. Give up writing until you grow up.!!

How old is she? Remember she has to be at least 18...Since You said that her pussy hair is dark, I suppose that her natural hair color is dark also. How long is her hair and how does she wear it?... Does she have big tits and nipples and what color are they? Does her nipples get hard and how fat do they get and how far do they stick out from her aureoles? How big are her aureoles, and what color are they?Is her pussy lips small and do they get wet when you play with them? You should have tasted her pussy and told us how good she tasted. I bet she is sweet and can cum all over your face if you suck on her clit... Tell us how you sucked on her toes,legs and thighs just to get to kiss her sweet ass...How big is her clit? ......Just tell us everything about this pretty little girl, just don't fuck her; make love to her and show her that you can be the only man she will ever need.....Write another chapter and let it all hang out, you can do it.Make love to her....Rich

Not the best story but not bad either . I don't know if the parents were leaving for a week or weekend . I only have 8" and the girls love it so 10 sounds very big . At least you're trying to write so good luck .

i look at all of you and your comments... i am utterly pissed off. not that you think the story is bad, but that you would say it directly to him and name call. you should all be ashamed of your selves! how old are you?

I hope you will continue with this story & write ch.02 soon. I don't care what some of the airheads below have to say I enjoyed this story. Don't stop writing.

When are you going to make a second part to this story?

to call a spade (shovel) a spade to get your point acrossed. this was real bad and needs to be deleted

"Is this the first time you see a cock?"

Is English your first language? It doesn't seem to be. Delete this trash.

Stopped read at 10 inches 1star