All Comments on 'Playfully His Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A womans Real Experience?

BULLSHIT

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Real or not

I look forward to the rest of it.

Ton8tyTon8tyover 16 years ago
Loved it! Very well written.

Very nice language usage in developing a mood and building the tension to a simmer. I'm sure that I'm not the only one waiting for it to boil over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
That Special Moment

Good portrayal of that special moment every submissive must experience when she suddenly knows she can no longer hide her super sensitive nature from the abrasion of a real encounter with a dominant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow can you feel the steam?

i am so creamy wet! you did a very nice job,building up the sexual tension between these two. i can not wait to read how this hard body man breaks down this young misses sexual inibitions. she's so needy,desperate and brave. a win-win combo for both of them. he'll reward her shameful desires as only a real man can. please hurry and let us read it.thanks, brooklyn

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