by playmiss
Very nice language usage in developing a mood and building the tension to a simmer. I'm sure that I'm not the only one waiting for it to boil over.
Good portrayal of that special moment every submissive must experience when she suddenly knows she can no longer hide her super sensitive nature from the abrasion of a real encounter with a dominant.
i am so creamy wet! you did a very nice job,building up the sexual tension between these two. i can not wait to read how this hard body man breaks down this young misses sexual inibitions. she's so needy,desperate and brave. a win-win combo for both of them. he'll reward her shameful desires as only a real man can. please hurry and let us read it.thanks, brooklyn