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Her father's father, painting her unborn brownie-logs, deep...up...into the stinking, fuming, inner-sanctum of her back-passage; his sizable knackers swinging gallantry between her open legs; ironically-gently, and perfectly-rhythmically...grazing...the very tip...of her young, engorged, female...clitoral helmet, with their cool, hair-clad, swinging, grandfatherly love.
Sherrie, has orgasms whilst filling the tank, nowadays: a throw-back from her younger garage hydro-carbon smelt affair.
(To be continued...)
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI'm not into scatology so I personally do not like the story but the story itself was well written and descriptive. Even if it disgusts you, you should not criticize the subject because anyone else can say the same thing about anything else.
I think you have a great writing style but I personally do not like the story. Don't let the other people affect your writing.
Baloney_Ponyover 12 years agoWhat part of "look at the low scores" don't you understand? At the time of this reading, you're rocking a 1.32 stars.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe word revulsion comes to mind as I am reading this. The writer shows some talent, but it is not my style.
nightshadowover 12 years agoReading this story was like this: William Gibson and Hunter S. Thompson got together and made a literary devil-baby who then went out and beat the shit out of Earnest Hemingway while trying to make it look like Andrew Dice Clay was guilty of the crime. If you can wrap your brain around that one, that pretty much fits what I just read.
