by pseudonym2005
Never read a story like this. It was quite original and very worth the time!
Can't wait for part 2!!!.. I also can't believe I liked a story enough to leave feedback, never done that before!
Well done, you managed to combine the most amount of sex between a large array of characters without it being too confusing. I even liked the story being retold from the other persons angle which I don't usually, it's hard to pull off well.
Go Josh!
One of the best I've read on this site, period. Please tell me there are many more chapters to come.
Very nicely done. Well written, good sex. You might have been better served to break it up into a few parts though rather than one big long installment.
hope there is more coming of this story, its an engaging plot with downright great sex scenes, multiple couplings without being too confusing, all in all well done.
Read 100's of stories here, never ever thought about leaving a comment.
Cant wait for part 2-20. ;)
Very nice story
this is the 1st story i comment and i love it the best by far. keep them coming and can we have a bit more of josh please i want to knw wat happen to him =]
More please! I am so wet after reading your story - can't wait for my husband to come to bed
Brilliant story, and a truly diverse and amazing plot line. Cheers.
Admittedly, its rare I can read a story through on this site, especially if its rather long...Yet strangely enough, a honest feeling of wanting to read it through overtook me and I ended up drinking in all of it. Well, as the cheesy title of this comment says, delicious story, indeed. And I've never liked rockstars, even if the lot of them are gorgeous/sizzling hot men much-so that's another note that compliments the story.
pseudonym2005, that is one awesome sex story. That is all. Moreeee.
Nice piece of character building, loved the story and the characters hope to see them pop up again.
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bravo
hurry up and write the next chapter...this was a great and fun read!!!!!!!!!!!!1
psedudonym2005,
Great Job. Particularly 8 and 9 pages. I am waiting for it to show up and you exceeded my expectations by the time I finished those two pages.
Welldone. Hope to see more of this.
Actually, great doesnt even begin to do it justice!
fan-FUCKING-tastic.
Keep, writing, for the love of god, PLEASE keep writing!!!
Very interesting characters and enjoyable plot. I'd love to see this continued.
Jerry in Washington state, USA - Jack, Josephine ... thank you for one of the best stories I've read on Literotica. You handled the transformation of Josh to Damien very well - probably as well as it could be written. I know it has been over a year since this story was posted, but I would love to read more of Josh's life adventures.
a short novel with a good and happy well begining for something more
but the whole idea of her having sex with someone under false pretenses because she thinks he's someone else is a bit skeevy
I'm glad you finally discovered the phrase "back and forth" ILO of your traditional "this way and that" which is a phrase which I find repugnant.