All Comments on 'Please Let Me Try'

that any self-ashured woman would approve his approach.

But a nice story anyhow.

I appreciate the feedback. I do realize the reality of this story is not very feasible. I just have fun writing about scenarios like this. Thanks for reading.

You wrote the poor guy to be so needy ... and it was interesting to read how his need may have caused the woman eventually gave in ... her last words ended with "future" ... these characters beg for sequels ... being his first gives her a chance to introduce him to the many pleasures of sex ... great read!

You'd be surprised how often women do like a strong direct approach.....Perhaps some kind of validation!

Short but hot story! 3*

I agree it is to short we need more too, see how far she will let him take her keep on trucking tenbears43

What a lift for the older lady. Very arousing wished it was longer. Write more please

I enjoyed the start of your story where in the coffee shop the 19 year old guy focuses his attention on a a sexy 30 plus year old woman. I personally would like it to be a 19 or 18 year old guy picking up a 42 plus year old woman - but that's only my preference. In summary, I hope you write more stories in the future. I believe your stories will only get better and better.

But a little more character build up would be nice!

Maybe in the next chapter you can tell us a little more about our friends!

Yeah. A fantasy of mine. Picking up an older woman like this.

Love this story. Nice fantasy that I've fantasized myself about often, the chance to go up to a nice looking woman who will let me touch her and perhaps both of us getting off with each other's help! Hot!

Now that was hot!