All Comments on 'Please Watch?'

by Mrs_Cumming

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mstrb77mstrb77almost 13 years ago
Feel Neil

Yes to make things right you should have let Neil finish in you as well as your husband, A double dose of cum feels good. Would taste good also.

kelsaffirmkelsaffirmalmost 13 years ago
honorably spun and related

consistency in author's point of view and character development is often charming, and while predictability is considered mundane in some eyes AND EARS, i find many literotica writers are unable or unwilling to pursue consistency. This is refreshing and provides education to the maturing adult; thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Love the build-up!

First flirting, then the bathroom confession, then the hottest moment of poor Neil's life. Great pacing to a hot finish. Thanks for sharing!

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