by anng469
Now she get's to go home and tell the hubbie she just changed their marriage. They now have a open swinging relationship. Ya right, this is a immature selfish lying slut who will keep fucking around till caught. I didn't find it erotic at all, just sad.
Looks at the idiot thats never had a fantasy. Your writing style is quite good. Wouldn't hurt to add a bit more about her husband if you are going to change it into a swing fantasy.
Where was that, written all the way through as fact, didn't see any fantsay, even the end. She talks as if it happened,just wondering.