All Comments on 'Pleasurable Working Environment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Oh Boy What Fun

Now she get's to go home and tell the hubbie she just changed their marriage. They now have a open swinging relationship. Ya right, this is a immature selfish lying slut who will keep fucking around till caught. I didn't find it erotic at all, just sad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Erotic

Looks at the idiot thats never had a fantasy. Your writing style is quite good. Wouldn't hurt to add a bit more about her husband if you are going to change it into a swing fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
What Fantsay

Where was that, written all the way through as fact, didn't see any fantsay, even the end. She talks as if it happened,just wondering.

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