All Comments on 'Pleasure Wraith'

Very good story Horse! I like the premise of an ethereal spirit moving from person to person helping them find their way in life. If possible I'd love to see this turned into a series of sorts involving different adventures of the Pleasure Wraith or Wraiths maybe as they help other people in need of a little help in their life.

The only thing I didn't like was the bit about her pussy smelling like bread. Sorry, H, but it brings to mind yeast infections. That's not sexy, honey. I think I might have given you a 5 if it hadn't been for that. :D

A sweet story; melancholy and hopeful, and also full of sensuous imagery and steamy sex.

Your descriptions have a poetic beauty counterbalanced by the right amount of smut which makes for a great read.

The concept of the story was executed well also.

Keep it up!

P.S.

Baked bread IS sexy.