by mistress_demetra
Writing leaves something to be desired. Doesn't flow. Editor should have caught that.
I want to thank everyone who left a comment on my story! I would really like to speak with the person who left the one comment. They didn't leave thier name, but I would like to tell them that the story is kinda both experience and writing skill. I have had my share of uninhibited sexual experiences. I like to try new things all the time! Please leave another comment if you are able. I would love to talk with you! Kisses!
Mistress Demetra
The finish was great and the actual description was good, it showed either great writing skills or first hand experince with great uninhibited sex.