All Comments on 'Pledge Prank'

The main character spends his time attempting to seduce the beautiful Marci. Eventually succeeding they make a pact to be fuckbuddies. Fun Read! Erotic but lighthearted!

I really loved this story and surprisingly, it's helped me make up my mind on moving on with my buddy. Thanks for the humourous outlook.

I liked this, the characters are cute together.

and I agree with the main character. 'Pearl Harbor' is my favorite, too.

--Pen

would like to hear how the other guys fared, maybe solo stuff followed by group

wow i was just blown away by the way of innonce this whole story was written thank you

The realism and character development of this story are the elements that make it outstanding. The way you introduce and differentiate the three boys, and present the dynamics of Marci and the boy leader make for a gradual build-up that create an extremely believable romp in Marci's sorority house room.

I like the diversionary Janice sex scene that never materializes, too. However, the numerous distracting typos of the sort that spellcheck misses--indicating that you did not even bother to edit--prevent me from giving the story a 100.

Keep the superb tales coming, and use your brain to edit.

I found you when checking the Valentine Contest. I was a winner of that contest by finding your tales.

Ahh! dreams of the college life. Thought thhis tale, while impossible, was great. thanks for your efforts .

I've been reading up on all your works, and I gotta say man, you should put all your stories in a book and sell it. You've got great imagery, you make the characters seem real, you got great story lines. Although I do have to say, there are some grammar and spelling mistakes in your works, but other then that, your stories are a joy to read. Keep up the good work.

I've read most of your stories, and I think of all of them this one definitely needs a sequel. It was just too good and left me wanting more.

Waiting for the sequel! Great read.

and that would be quite the story to tell the children!

your story got me all horny and yet mushy...this deserves a follow up peace or better yet, a novella of its own...keep up the great work...

I really enjoyed your story, very well thought through, good dialogue, hot sex. One of the best ones on this site.

plz write more and countinue this story ahead

Love the story. Love the sex. Im going to give it a four only because I want more of the story!!

Wonderful little story leaves me wanting to know what he told the other Stooges later that day, did she give him her bra so he could avoid a pledge penalty, what did he tell Tommy, and did they ever explain to their children how they met?

The Author's job is done. The rest is up to the readers' imagination.

but you didn't finish the story...what happened to his mates did they score and what about the prank - did she give him the bra and after they got married and the kids came along did he tell them the story......wonderful and funny....loved it

It has a Wholeness...

Your trump card is your dialog.

You could write screenplays...and/or plays.

A sequel would be delightful!

A good little snippet. Loved it.

But curious minds want to know - did he take her red bra with him when he left?

Like others I see the possibility of more, unlike them I like it this way, thank you really enjoyed it

It had been many many years since I read this last. But I came back looking and was surprised that I had only remembered the premise and had forgot the happily ever after part.

What a wonderfully light hearted and sappy story. I hope he is able to tell their grand kids about this when they get older.

And I hope he steals the bra anyway and they can laugh about it for years to come

Good story. Would have been great to continue the tale.

Don’t listen to them! Your story is great as it is. They didn’t make a sequel to Casablanca did they?

Excellent,

Loved thus story. And I'd love a sequel. Thank you!

What a great story.

I come back and read this story about once a year. The chemistry between Marci and Moe, you never name him, is so much fun. I adore the banter back and forth. I don’t want a sequel. Imagining the two of them together in the future is more fun than a sequel.