All Comments on '"Poke Her" Night'

An arrousing story, although not long enough & not enough detail.

Wife is a whore,you are a whimp,wow what a great night.

See dick catch Jane. See Jane suck dick dick's. See john fuck Jane. see all the kids fuck Jane...sheesh...what an imagination you have weakman...the story's been published lots of times. You just made a dick and jane out of it...Go away..stay away

Ignore the pseudo-macho "anonymous" posters...they just got lost looking for the closet on their way to the "Gay Male" category...

This was more like a letter to a dirty magazine than a story, except that in a magazine, you'd at least have proper grammar and punctuation. Don't be afraid to use the "comma" key every once in a while, pal. There could have been more detail here - what happened, did you have a 20-minute break at work and you wrote it in that time?

Not badly written. Just too short, no details and no clue if it's your life or a fantasy that you want to come true. Are you a slut or just want to be one? Do you have a man to give you away to others or would you have to be a whore and do it yourself? Maybe a story about how you became such a slut and cum lover.

This was good, and a real turn-on, but a lot more detail as to foreplay would have resulted in a 100 rating. It was like going from zero to sixty in only a minute. A lot more buildup is necessary for erotic stories. :-)

I thought it was great. Certainly turned me on however there could of been more detail. When I got to the end, I thought to myself "That's it?." Good start though.

This really had potential to be a great story, but you couldn't hold it together. It needs to be expanded upon.

It was too simple, too direct. For example, it would have been more interesting if she wasn't so readily available, if Randy had played her at poker and lost her to his friends, etc.

mmmmm... made me cum...

Story has a good pretext but shifts a little too quickly, and doesn't have enough details during the intercourse to sustain enough arousal, could be much better.

Lacks a lot of detail and is basically a wham bam thank you m'am not the worst I've seen but really lacks in where you could have taken it.

wow are people really commenting on literotica? I never thought there'd be reviews for written porn hahahah

i mean it didnt get me, well anything. i feel bad for the girl in the story though, she passed out!caould have done much much better. keep trying.

you wrapped that up far too quickly :(

Thats how my wife likes it, she loves being watched on the beaches of Jamaca

I'm jealous... I would love to be Cindy... 3 cocks all at the same time and what a fantastic partner to encourage it... if only it was like that in real life! and none of the jealousy and insecurities. Wish guys were better at sharing us horny women!!!

That was great, if you'd drawn it out a not longer I would have been able to get off just reading it.

I agree with some of the others, it was a little too short. However, I am certainly jealous of Cindy! I wish there was more foreplay, the guys could have used their fingers more! That's how I like it!!!

I just came 4 times reading that, wow what a fantasy, I just love gang bangs!!

that was a fun tale - thanks for pointing me to it and your other work

Hot and to the point! Would love to be HER!

Short and to the point, sweet and HOT. More please.

I think you and your wife did right and sharing your wife and body with your friends. About every wife would like to do that but donot know how to go about it. My wife has shares her body with friends and others over again. Many has come back for more and she gave it to them..Also brought friends with them wife did not know and she enjoyed them. Tapes been made and showed at all male parties.I love my wife for all she does for me and others. A few men brought their wifes to be shared at one time or other. THANKS TO ALL AND MAY WE STILL GO ON.

Happy is when you enjoy yourself. Connie like having poker night and end the end always get all she can handle. She like having new men sharing her body and she sharing theirs. Let you and your wife have game with her body Let her suck and fuck all your friends and strangers and you will enjoy the out come. show your wife show off herself to all to see.

Sounds like annony.'s wife. she fucked him over the first week they were married. And now he's fucking insane. He reads all the LW and cuck stories and then votes 1 day after day! he's nuts!

Sounds like a great fantasy but needs more development and detail; you got to the end to quick. Keep writing

This story was great. It made my long thick cock very hard. Love sex stories that leave the reader begging for more. Love big Tits also.

Hot! It's funny, though, that every sex story I've read that was written by a guy has every woman in it having huge tits. Personally, my philosophy is: "Everything over a mouthful is a waste!" But, back to the story - it was good. It was well-written albeit short. I didn't really notice any grammatical errors. I would have liked to see much more detail in the development and the actual sex, not that there wasn't detail there, but I like stories that go on for 3-4 pages or more, or even several chapters. Still, I liked your story.