by cendin
my name is reuben i love poker party gangbang
why do the moral morons keep reading them? Are they English Professors?
Sure, it's a rehash, but it throws in a few flavor elements (Asian wife) and the technical execution isn't bad at all. Don't let the cynics get you down, this was a good starter story!
Hey....At least the writer shortened the same ol' story down to just a breif few thoughts. Now that efficient. Just make it effective and you'll be a star!
not very imagniative. Come up with your own story line..you can use the theme of the wife seducing the buddies, but build up the suspense and create a different setting.
I want my penis to inflate not deflate.
How unique a story theme. Another wife gangbanged at a poker party.
What will writers think of next?
I'll bet if I look hard enough, a white married woman will be taken by a large black man.
You forgot to add at the end of your story how much she loved her husband and said "thank you" for let me do this.
That would have been unique too.