All Comments on 'Polar Attraction'

by Eli is Coming

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
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Oh goodness. You are an amazing writer. Honestly, I absolutely loved this, you write with so much emotion and detail that I was left breathless. If you ever stopped writing stories I might cry. The only thing I found issue with was some small typos. Other than that, you basically just made my day.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
excellent!

I love politics, being a "liberal pussy" myself.

You're an amazing writer, and this was a fantastic story.

(:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Brilliant

I know what its like to be a writer - even if you're so good it seems like it should just speak for itself, you still want some feedback and some praise. Well, sir/maam, you are extremely talented and I hope you continue to write stories that take us away from the grind of our days. This story was smart, funny and very, very sexy - well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good Job

This was very well written! Its also ripe for a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

All the American politics would have been bearable if the writing was actually good. Your writing structure is poor and reeks pretentiousness.

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