All Comments on 'Pool Party'

Love d the story! Now how about carying it into chapter 3 and tell us how he got revenge on the two friends who watched out for his wife. And how he handled her deceiving him. That would make a great chapter three.

Very well written and a good story line. Keep up the great work.

I gave the story a 80, due to the fact that it was well written,BUT (big but)... If the guy was even 10% man, he would have at least confronted them. In my personal opinion....he should have taken a two by four and beat the sombitch to a bloody pulp and made the wife lick it up for being a lying, slut whore. For gods sake DO write a follow up and have the hubby turn the tables or show that he has a pair.

This is your classic wimp mindless cuck story...

Because the lead in was pretty weak. I really need a better explaination as to what led up to this. You do write fairly hot sex though. And I do absolutely lothe (sic) cucholds but I tend to give better scores if the storyline is well done. This one needed some work. You have to pull the reader in.

Regards,

C

the premise was retarded because no one would risk his life but fucking another squad mates wife or girlfriend. you're going to put your life in the hands of a man whos spouse you just fucked? You're fucking kidding me right? Get bent asshole

In fact why did he stay at the party...... Trash like that you dont keep you throw it away.

Whiskeybuff --- your stories keep portraying a single theme that should have been developed far beyond the stagnant: hubby enjoys being a cuckold; he senses she is an expert at omission; he watches maybe 5% of all that Kathy really does; and he knows that Amy and Beth cover for her. Why hasn't he confronted her for the total truth, set up a voyeur partnership, open their relationship so that he can do Amy and Beth. Instead the gutless wimp prefers to be ridiculed by Steve, Roger and others. Go further and let him enjoy... go beyond your single theme repeated in reach of your stories. He doesn't have to be a wimp, he can be a partner participant.

You have another chapter and have her husband film her fucking all these guy and devorce her slut ass. And fuck over all those assholes. You have too you can't leave him looking like wimp. Good store.cdc

He should get video,autio and pictutes on all of the ones that wore involved. And destroy all their lives and throw out that slut whore. But good story. Next chapter very soon i hope.

Although it was a hot story, you set it in the military! The wife and every one of those involved committed TREASON! They would all be subjected to courts marshal, and dishonorably discharged. The husband would be the resipient of another increase in the national debt.

It's not TREASON. It's called adultery. And mix of other UCMJ terms that could be tossed at his boss and the other dudes. But no, it's not treason, which is punishable up to death. And the husband wouldn't be a recipient of anything. The military doesn't pay out because you've been had by your wife and co-workers. At best, he could take her to family court and try for something, but it's unlikely he'd get anything more than to keep all of his retirement, belongings, real property, and the such.

Never about USAF Special Forces! The USAF may be a uniformed service, but not really an Armed Force.

Old Army grunt.

Obviously a product of a repressed homosexual.

whiskybuff is a good writer.

His specialty are slut wife/voyeur husband scenarios.

I say it is realistic because i experienced something along those lines but way less dramatic. However it happened to me at a party where most guests came with their children! A very family event. Yes there was a nice swimming pool on the grounds but it was mostly used by children.

While i was by the swimming pool with our very young son, my wife mingled with other guests.

Later on she was alone talking to a very rich divorced guy, who was a known womanizer. For about 20 minutes the 2 of them were nowhere to be seen. Then she reappeared in the back yard, brought me a beer, kissed me, & told me she loved me. Go figure!

Worthle cuck wimp shit. She's a whore of the highest order, he's a wimp and unworthy of the uniform and respect. And now his unit won't respect him either. Complete garbage.

The author's intent was to write a voyeur/cuck husband story, & he accomplished that task with flying colors.

I would sue her and all the punk ass people at that party

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Dude is a fucken pussy!

Why do so many of you leave nasty comments because you don’t like this kind of story? Stop reading stories under the Loving Wives section. Guess what? They’re about guys who enjoy their wives having sex with other men! Who would’ve thought?

Approving husband is a little different term for cuckold. Whore wife is the same though .

Vomit enforcer par excellence

Stupid cuck shit, don’t read this drivel.

As of today this story's got 188 favorites (favs) out of 353,197 views. That's a very good favs-to-views ratio, i.e. 0.53 favs per 1K views. This story (& this author) have a faithful fan base.

Honestry I do not understand why some people would shit-talk this story. The list of similar stories includes titles like Anna Succumbs to Neighbors Cock, & Three Days of Watching my Wife Fuck. (Literotica forewarned you.)

Cuckold guys live among other people & they pose no threat to anybody. It is not against the law for a husband to forgive his wife after she does something wrong. I will respectfully argue that a voyeur husband and his "loving wife" are in a quazi symbiotic relationship. Maybe each of them is discovering (has discovered) their own true self. Her true self can thrive only if she enjoys some sort of hall pass (whether it is implicit or explicit). Loves her "most understang husband" & he knows she will always come home. As regards the voyeur husband, his cheating wife turns him on way more than when she was faithful. He used to love her truly, madly, deeply. He still loves her that way but he also loves her "undonditionally & selflessly". He used to admire her body. He now worships it. When she sees that her her hubby is sad &/or depressed, she buys a new bikini, yet skimpier than the previous, for a forthcoming pool party, or if it is a BBQ party she buys a new pair of dasy dukes, which reaveal the bottom portion of her cheeks; she tells him she will wear the new item only if he wants her to. "You must tell me if you think it is 'too much,' because I will wear it just for you."

What man is going to stand around ,hide and run away when his wife is being fingered and then screwed. Same old wussy male scared of his own shadow.

It's a blessing and a curse to be a voyeur husband or boyfriend:

the naughtier she is & the more she embarrasses you in public,

the more she turns you on & the happier you are.

It's not a guy's choice to be a voyeur husband. He's kinky &

he can't help it, plain and simple.

👍👍! 😊

even if he doesn't care what she did up to this point in the car he should just point blank so no way am I eating Rogers cream pie!

Troy is a little pussy, He has no guts, no balls and is too chicken to stand up to Roger.

He catches his wife fucking Roger and just stands there and watches like a fool, He should have stepped and told Roger too get his fucking hands and his stupid cock off his wife.

Instead Troy is going home to eats Roger's cum and he will watch Roger get his wife pregnant and Troy will have to raise Roger's son. Ha ha ha ha, must suck to be Troy.

Troy is such a loser. All his wife Kathy wants to do is look super hot and fuck Roger the Stud.

Kathy never thinks of the poor man she married.

Troy would be best to divorce Kathy and find himself a less attractive wife that will love him and be faithful to him. After all, a pussy is a pussy and all pussy holes are the same.

Husband grow a set of balls leave. Slut now. Fuck up roger and slut

Wouldn’t want that chicken shit watching my back in a fight. What happened to officer and gentlemen?

5- [4.4 = 88% = A (☆☆☆☆☆-) 👍👍!]

Btw, whiskybuff is a very very good writer.

I'm copy pasting another user's comment to this story:

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Anon about 1 year ago

LOVED IT (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (five stars)!

It's a blessing and a curse to be a voyeur husband or boyfriend: the naughtier she is & the more she embarrasses you in public, the more she turns you on & the happier you are.

It's not a guy's choice to be a voyeur husband. He's kinky & he can't help it, plain and simple.

👍👍! 😊

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Two excerpts from an older comment:

"Anon over 3 years ago

This is an EXCELLENT...

"The author's intent was to write a voyeur/cuck husband story, & he accomplished that task with flying colors."

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I LOVED this story because it is both erotic and true to life.

Shit happens at parties. (Thank god not on all parties!) My wife was AWOL from a big ass party for 30 minute. Before she went missing she was in the company of a divorced successful man, 10 years her senior. They were together when they reappeared. She offered her explanation before i asked her anything. I was not buying her explanation, but kept my doubts to myself.

I'm copy pasting this comment (I think ot is true to life):

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Anonymous about 1 year ago

LOVED IT (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (five stars)!

It's a blessing and a curse to be a voyeur husband or boyfriend:

the naughtier she is & the more she embarrasses you in public,

the more she turns you on & the happier you are.

It's not a guy's choice to be a voyeur husband. He's kinky &

he can't help it, plain and simple.

👍👍! 😊

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5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟)!

❤❤.

Excerpt from an earliet comment:

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"... I LOVED this story because it is both erotic and true to life.

Shit happens at parties. (Thank god not on all parties!)

My wife was AWOL from a big ass party for 30 minute. Before she went missing she was in the company of a divorced successful man, 10 years her senior. They were together when they reappeared. She offered her explanation before i asked her anything. I was not buying her explanation, but kept my doubts to myself."

LOVED it.

Gave you a 5- (4.65 = 93%, ☆☆☆☆☆-).

Very very erotic

Whiskybuff is a very good writer.

☆☆☆☆☆- [5- (4.6 = 92%, ☆☆☆☆☆-)]

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤- (5-)

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤- (5-)

:-)

I believe his boss and Roger, being officers in the Air Force (did I get that right?) could be brought up on charges of adultery. It would finish them.

👍👍!

Great story and “reflects the way it really was” in days gone by when warriors were men and their wives enjoyed being women. At a northern base, there was a squadron who occasionally had parties where their wives wore sexy sleep wear and most wore backless “Teddies!”

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I am copy pasting an anonimous comment which I really liked.

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Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

I LOVE IT: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 [5 (4.75/5 = 95%)]! whiskybuff is a very good writer of Loving Wife stories.

As of today this story's got 188 favorites (favs) out of 353,197 views. That's a very good favs-to-views ratio, i.e. 0.53 favs per 1K views. This story (& this author) have a faithful fan base.

Honestry I do not understand why some people would shit-talk this story. The list of similar stories includes titles like Anna Succumbs to Neighbors Cock, & Three Days of Watching my Wife Fuck. (Literotica forewarned you.)

Cuckold guys live among other people & they pose no threat to anybody. It is not against the law for a husband to forgive his wife after she does something wrong. I will respectfully argue that a voyeur husband and his "loving wife" are in a quazi symbiotic relationship. Maybe each of them is discovering (has discovered) their own true self. Her true self can thrive only if she enjoys some sort of hall pass (whether it is implicit or explicit). Loves her "most understang husband" & he knows she will always come home. As regards the voyeur husband, his cheating wife turns him on way more than when she was faithful. He used to love her truly, madly, deeply. He still loves her that way but he also loves her "undonditionally & selflessly". He used to admire her body. He now worships it. When she sees that her her hubby is sad &/or depressed, she buys a new bikini, yet skimpier than the previous, for a forthcoming pool party, or if it is a BBQ party she buys a new pair of dasy dukes, which reaveal the bottom portion of her cheeks; she tells him she will wear the new item only if he wants her to. "You must tell me if you think it is 'too much,' because I will wear it just for you."

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♡♡♡♡♡(5.0)

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

💥💥💥💥💥 (five stars)

Excerpt from an anon comment posted 2 years ago.

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... I will respectfully argue that a voyeur husband and his "loving wife" are in a quazi symbiotic relationship. Maybe each of them is discovering (has discovered) their own true self. Her true self can thrive only if she enjoys some sort of hall pass (whether it is implicit or explicit). [She] loves her "most understang husband" & he knows she will always come home. As regards the voyeur husband, his cheating wife [now] turns him on way more than when she was faithful. He used to love her truly, madly, deeply. He still loves her that way but he also loves her "unconditionally & selflessly". He used to admire her body. He now worships it. When she sees that her her hubby is sad &/or depressed, she buys a new bikini, yet skimpier than the previous, for a forthcoming pool party, or if it is a BBQ party she buys a new pair of dasy dukes, which reaveal the bottom portion of her cheeks; she tells him she will wear the new item only if he wants her to. "You must tell me if you think it is 'too much,' because I will wear it just for you."

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I am copy pasting one if the comments.

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Anonymous, 6 months ago

Two excerpts from an older comment:

"Anon over 3 years ago

This is an EXCELLENT...

"The author's intent was to write a voyeur/cuck husband story, & he accomplished that task with flying colors."

* * *

I LOVED this story because it is both erotic and true to life.

Shit happens at parties. (Thank god not on all parties!) My wife was AWOL from a big ass party for 30 minute. Before she went missing she was in the company of a divorced successful man, 10 years her senior. They were together when they reappeared. She offered her explanation before i asked her anything. I was not buying her explanation, but kept my doubts to myself.

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I like whiskybuff's stories.

I have read most of them.

For this story I gave you a 5 (★★★★★)!

Excerpt ftom anon comment to this story posted 6 months ago:

I LOVED this story because it is both erotic and true to life.

Shit happens at parties. (Thank god not on all parties!)

My wife was AWOL from a big-ass party for 30 minute. Before she went missing she was in the company of a divorced successful man, 10 years her senior. They were together when they reappeared. She offered her explanation before i asked her anything. I was not buying her explanation, but kept my doubts to myself."

Love this! Reminds of a pool party a few years back at my neighbor's house. My wife is a hot little redhead who isn't shy about her body. She was in her mid 50s at the time and looked 30. Drinks were flowing and at one point in the evening she and one of her friends stripped down and jumped in for a swim. When they came out of the pool my wife stayed naked and chatted with some of our male friends, sipping a drink. My cock was on fire and she was the center of every man's attention in the place. When she went inside to dress and pull herself together our host followed her inside. After several minutes I went to see what was going on. As I walked past a window I heard his voice and looked in. She was still nude and his hand was on the small of her back as they talked and laughed. His other hand brushed across her breast and she giggled. He complimented her body, told her he had often fantasized about seeing her naked. SHe asked if that was all and he said no, said that he fantasized of her sucking his cock. She answered, "Well, it's just a blow job." and sank to her knees, pulled down his bathing suit and began romancing his cock with her mouth. I know it was the drinks working in all three of us, and I was totally turned on watching her satisfy our older neighbor to a sweet, swallowing completion.

whiskybuff is a very good story teller.

His specialty are slut wife/voyeur husband scenarios.

This story gets a 5 (☆☆☆☆☆).

5.0 = 💯% (💜💙💚💛❤) 👍👍!

5 (☆☆☆☆☆)!

I LOVEXD this story.

I am copy pasting someone else's comment because it hits the nail on the head.

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Anonymous, almost 2 years ago

LOVED IT (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (five stars)!

It's a blessing and a curse to be a voyeur husband or boyfriend:

the naughtier she is & the more she embarrasses you in public, the more she turns you on & the happier you are.

It's not a guy's choice to be a voyeur husband. He's kinky & he can't help it, plain and simple.

👍👍! 😊

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My wife found this and we both enjoyed it tremendously. My wife has the morals of Kathy, in your story, and it took me a few years of marriage to get used to it. But once I did, I was always on my knees licking another man's cum out of her cunt after each party. We have no idea who were the fathers of our three children. However, they certainly are not mine. I got a vasectomy on our first wedding anniversary!

I LOVED this story.

I am copy pasting somebody else's comment because I really can relate to it.

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Anonymous, about 2 years ago

LOVED IT (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (five stars)!

It's a blessing and a curse to be a voyeur husband or boyfriend: the naughtier she is & the more she embarrasses you in public,

- the more she turns you on & the happier you are.

It's not a guy's choice to be a voyeur husband. He's kinky & he can't help it, plain and simple.

👍👍! 😊

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EXCERPT FROM P. 1 OF THE STORY.

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"Oh, don't be an old prude," Kathy retorted gaily. "I have the body for it, so why shouldn't I wear it? Aren't you proud of me? Don't you want the other guys to know what a prize you have? They'll think I'm the hottest little officer in the entire Air Force, and besides, there will be no enlisted personnel there, just other officers. I'll bet Amy and Beth wear little bikinis too, and you know I can't have them show me up."

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👍👍!

poor guy, his wife is fucking every cock in town, but his,

I bet you roger knocked her up too if his wife handle one large one she can handle two them

My kind of wife sex story.