by Flashlight7.5
poor background and character development and no end equals a waste of time that NEVER SHOULD HAVE BEEN POSTED.
I was expecting more than that. It was getting exciting than all of a sudden it endded you should definatly write more about this.
Weres the sequel?
i was just about to blow my load and all the sudden it ends? Weres the sequel?
Otherwise a very descriptive and sensual story.