All Comments on 'Poolside Shennanigans'

by MrSand

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent setting...

Story has an excellent setup for a series. Normal setting, unique situation where choices lead characters down an unexpected path. Now that the line has been crossed, what will happen between the participants or will a similar setup bring others into the game? Great work!

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchalmost 11 years ago
In the neutral zone

I'm not saying yea or nay for this one. But that has to be the first tit rape I've seen in a story.

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