All Comments on 'Possession Ch. 05'

I'm addicted to you!!!!!!!

Hanging over a cliff now! cant wait for the next!

I want more!

He doesn't know it yet, but karma is laughing her ass off at this dude.

...but AUGGHH, why would you stop right before it gets to the good part? That's just mean.

(I'll still five this if you promise you'll get the next part out soon, though. ;)

Loved that FA...made me chuckle

Methinks he may have met his match here. Somebody holds the power in this relationship and it ain't him.

Lovely story Tania, but if you keep us hanging too long, methinks again that somebody will pay you a visit and chain you to your keyboard after locking you in your study. !....and no pavlova or meringue until finished...Ahhh knew that would get your attention.

Wonder when darling step daddy gets a visit from the boys.

You stopped when it was getting interesting why be so mean??? Anyway please continue with this story soon can't wait to find out what happens next! X

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You sure know how to make us want more! Please post the next chapter soon!!

Nooooooooo! Finishing it there was very Grinch like! I love this story, not quite sure what Dmitri wants but I don't think he has clue either so am happy to wait and see. Thanks.

You are quite a talented writer. Remind me a lot of Titania and we all know how talented she is. Agree with other commenters that was quite naughty of you to end the chapter just when we are getting to the good part. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter...please update soon.

I just wanna punch this guy's face! Uuuuuugggggggh! Great story!

cliff hangerrrrrrrr. please update soon. don't leave us high and dry

Pure evil why did it end there

I normally don't complain about short chapters but this one was rather ridiculous. If your readers are willing to stay up all night to read your beautiful work, the least you could do is stay up all night writing it. If this chapter took you twenty times as long to write as it did to read, you still would only have been writing for 3.5 hours. That aside, it is a definite juicy story. I hope he gets addicted to her, as alphas in these stories often do. It is always super hot. Please continue!

Such a gentleman at dinner...such a brute in the bedroom. You'd hardly believe it was the same person if you didnt know better. Infuriatingly short climax i have to say. then again nobody would be complaining if this wasnt so good that they absolutely detested the cliff hanger.

Oh you little vixen let's see him melt her in to that most terrible of submission "body over mind" which is so delicious.... but also lets see the bastard stepfather get his as as well!

How in the name of reason she would spread her legs willingly....if her being there is against her will..! Men can be so stupid....you portrayed him perfectly! Well done.

So I have exactly 10 mins to type this - afraid Ch. 06 won't be coming out before the new year... Internet at home has gone down and has only just been restored when I have a train to catch! (funnily enough, posting the most erotic chapter in this story so far from my work pc didn't seem like a great idea...)

Please don't hate me! Will update sooooon! x

Grumpily miffed at you, perhaps...

Merry, merry

We'll wait for you to brighten our new year.

Ah well

Patience is a virtue as they say.

Modern teknoligy is fine when it works...bugga when it doesn't

Ps...can't see what your boss would have to whinge about personally :-))

Your story is awesome!!! I love it when I come across a book like this that keeps me checking for the next chapter.

Good job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

ive just read this avidly why is there not more already chapter 6 please very soon

This story is really great---please hurry and publish another chapter (or two).

please finish this it started so well

Happy Holidays all! (belatedly!)

Chapter 6 is almost there - just giving it a couple of tweaks! Expect to post it during the week :) x

Omg!! More please! Can't wait to find out what happens next

5 chapters and no sex. Slow build to the extreme.

im sorry but this story is amazing and so what no sex yet the suspense is killing us talk about not being able to put a book./laptop down if this was a book id be reading it all night

Posting CH 6 during the week? All you've done is make me look like a needy flop . Where is it already!?

Iv always wanted to write something like this .. but the stories stay in my head n my heros keep evolving in my mind..... If i ever write i hope it turns out like your story.......btw Where is chapter 6. ...can't locate it.. Im desperate to read the next chprers .....Just keep them coming... One chapter each day :-)

I love this story and I wanted to know if your ever going to finish it!!

Hola, my readers! The next part is in the queue and the hands of the Lit gods - hopefully will be up in the next week - nag them, not me!!!

thank you TANIARICE we shall wait with bated breath now get writing on the next episode lol xxxxxxx hahahahaahahahh

The ending of this chapter is just epic!

The insight into both of their minds is enrapturing.

I am LOVING this!! Great story :)

Heh, the guy is deluding himself if he thinks he's not forcing her. Of course he is.