by Lost-Boy
i have been reading Literotica for maybe 10 years and this was one of the best ever. More please.
I'm enjoying the story, but might I suggest finding an editor? While my grammar isn't great there were a number of errors even I noticed and I felt it took away from the story.
Spooky and erie, with a lot of erotic sex mixed in.
I want to see how he uses his power over his mom, and how he makes her his submissive.
Thanks for the read.
Cause the story is great, so many avenues you can explore
I absolutely loved this, I sincerely hope you continue the story!
So hopefully you have not abandoned this story. It was pretty good and I can't wait for the next installment. Keep going!